Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Tutorial #5 and storyboard

So, here's the lip sync tutorial :


and my storyboards. The title isn't included but I really think I am going to name it "How do you like them apples?" because it seems to fit well. Nothing interesting in how I use the title if you really are all that curious. It'll just appear and then fade into nothingness in the first frame. Nothingness.



After my people reviewed my work, I think I am going to have to fix some parts that aren't clear enough. I'll probably need to have an establishing shot to show the tree full of apples to show that at the very end of the story, there are none left. Also, Max seems to think that there is a gaping void in the top of my characters head as he eats the apple so more to come on that...

4 comments:

Hannah said...

Oh my god it blows! hahaha Just kidding. I think this is gonna be wonderfully funny. I can't wait to see the tree climbing sheep. And your story board looked really good. I have only one complaint and you heard it! I think making the contrast between the "apple-full" tree and "apple-less" tree should be made more clear. Like ridiculously clear. And that would be perfect.

Robyn Haley said...

"two pieces of candy!"

So clarification on the sheep just being on a tree (not being used as a punching glove, or being skewered) and what will probably be a repeat comment on making a clearer view of the apples now off the tree. Just bring the view out on one of the shots, it doesn't necessarily have to be a camera move.

Meg said...

I'm not quit sure what is poking the sheep, other then that I can read clearly, cute sheep bye the way.

Max said...

Seems fine to me, but it's a little tricky to understand that he's sad 'cause the apples are gone. Shouldn't he be happy because he ate the perfect apple, THEN sad that there aren't any left? Maybe, maybe not. You're doing a great job. Go team. Good hustle. Winners can't be choosers. Jenga.